外企應聘英文簡歷點評

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Balance Sheet基本方法
    選擇要應聘的工作后，必須看清招聘廣告上所列出的每項要求，再將自己的學歷、能力與興趣逐一與之比較，作一張balance sheet.
    例如，一則關于marketing management trainee和job requirement是這樣寫的：
    We are looking for a competent person to fill the captioned position：
    -University graduate major in Marketing Management. Prepared to develop career in the commercial field
    -Outgoing personality
    -Able to communicate at different levels
    -Good knowledge of PC operations
    -Proficiency in written and spoken English/Mandarin
    那么你相應地考慮自己的qualification的`選擇和表述，就可以這樣寫（與上列各項對應）：
    -University graduate with major in Marketing
    -Having actively participated in Business clubs activities and learned accounting and management
    -Good in communication with people and like a lot of out door activities, know how to tackle with people from all walks of life
    -Skillful in operating Words, Excel, Lotus1-2-3, etc
    -Fluent in English and Mandarin
    這個方法的好處是可讓求職者清楚了解該職位是否適合自己，而本身資料又是否切合要求，而且，明白了各項要求后，就可依據每一點在履歷表上重點提出自己在該方面的強項。突出賣點(selling point)，將之放在最吸引人的地方，使招聘者一眼可見，有利于present自己。

Work experience工作經驗的陳述
    工作經驗是resume中令招聘者相當感興趣的一項內容，善加措詞是不可忽視的要務。
    剛畢業，何來工作經驗？其實，讀書時的兼職、實習、實踐，以至所曾參加的一些課外活動－協助出版學校刊物、舉辦活動，展覽、宣傳……都可算是工作經驗、不過，表達起來要有針對性地展開，列出那些與所找工作有關的項目重點介紹，必要時更可使用summary的方式，以給招聘者深入的了解。
    下面的寫法顯得相當簡陋呆板：
    1996/7-1996/8 General Clerk, IBM
    1995/7-1995/8 Account clerks, Manley Toy Trading
    1994/6-1994/8Salesgirl, Esprit.
    倘能換一種表述如：
    Three years of job experience in different positions have offered me opportunities to understand different job aspects.
    -As a General Clerk (IBM),Accounts clerk (Manley Toy Trading), I have learned how to prepare purchasing orders,place orders, handle accounting matter, check voucher,… also (Salesgirl, Esprit) developing the technique of selling, serving and stocking.