造句要做到準確、多樣以及高分表達

1. 句型分析

　　英語的句型包括以下幾種，簡單句、復合句、并列句、并列復合句等。在新托福寫作中，一般使用復合句，輔以并列句和并列復合句，當然肯定要有簡單句，做到長短句相結合。下面摘抄幾個句子給大家認識并分析一下復合句和并列復合句。

　　a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

　　這句話是一個復合句，由even though引導的讓步狀語從句。

　　b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

　　這句話中是一個復合句。with介詞結構中，有一個that引導的同位語從句對result進行解釋說明。

　　c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

　　上句話是一個并列復雜句。and 連接了兩個句子，是一個并列句;because引導的原因狀語從句。

　　d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.

　　這句話同樣是并列復雜句。由and連接兩個句子，成為并列句，再一個which引導的定語從句。

2. 有問題的句子的列舉

　　分析認為，考生寫的句子容易出現三個問題：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接連句，三是句子連接不正確。

1) 破碎句

　　所謂破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是沒有謂語（或者說謂語是動詞的非謂語形式，如分詞），或者是從句單獨成句。

　　破碎句：She singing alone.（無謂語，singing是現在分詞）

　　正確句：She is singing alone.

　　破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick.（從句單獨成句）

　　正確句：He did not come because he was sick.