造句要做到準(zhǔn)確、多樣以及高分表達(dá)

1. 句型分析

　　英語(yǔ)的句型包括以下幾種，簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句、并列句、并列復(fù)合句等。在新托福寫作中，一般使用復(fù)合句，輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句，當(dāng)然肯定要有簡(jiǎn)單句，做到長(zhǎng)短句相結(jié)合。下面摘抄幾個(gè)句子給大家認(rèn)識(shí)并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。

　　a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

　　這句話是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。

　　b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

　　這句話中是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中，有一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句對(duì)result進(jìn)行解釋說明。

　　c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

　　上句話是一個(gè)并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個(gè)句子，是一個(gè)并列句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。

　　d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.

　　這句話同樣是并列復(fù)雜句。由and連接兩個(gè)句子，成為并列句，再一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。

2. 有問題的句子的列舉

　　分析認(rèn)為，考生寫的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個(gè)問題：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接連句，三是句子連接不正確。

1) 破碎句

　　所謂破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是沒有謂語(yǔ)（或者說謂語(yǔ)是動(dòng)詞的非謂語(yǔ)形式，如分詞），或者是從句單獨(dú)成句。

　　破碎句：She singing alone.（無謂語(yǔ)，singing是現(xiàn)在分詞）

　　正確句：She is singing alone.

　　破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick.（從句單獨(dú)成句）

　　正確句：He did not come because he was sick.