My Seasons

　　We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when its wind. And I can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but its not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

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　　寫法：這篇短文是描述我的四季，在寫法上，是根據春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替來寫的，先講明每個季節的特征，之后再寫在這個季節中的主要活動或比較有代表性的活動。同時講一些自己的真實感受，最后闡述自己最喜歡的季節。在實際的寫作的時候我們還可以先寫出自己喜愛的季節及主要的活動內容，之后再去講其他幾個季節，還可以多講解一下地域的季節特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黃，農民在收割等等，這樣寫出來的四季更貼近實際。