篇一：給校長(zhǎng)的建議書(英文)

　　尊敬的李校長(zhǎng)，

　　您好！

　　來到天津大學(xué)已經(jīng)兩年了，成為天津大學(xué)的一份子讓我感覺很驕傲。但是，我們學(xué)校現(xiàn)在還是存在一些問題沒有得到很好地解決。

　　我感受最深的就是天大沒有全天的自習(xí)室，我認(rèn)為圖書館應(yīng)該適當(dāng)延長(zhǎng)開放時(shí)間，因?yàn)榘滋斓臅r(shí)候?qū)W生們都有課，沒有時(shí)間去圖書館看書，但是現(xiàn)在圖書館很早就閉館了，尤其是在周日和周六，閉關(guān)的時(shí)間就更早了，但是大家往往只有雙休日才有時(shí)間去圖書館。真心希望這個(gè)問題可以早日解決，謝謝您~

　　Dear President Lee，

　　I’m very glad to be a student of Tianjin University, which owns a long history and practical school spirit. However, there are still some problems in our school, such as the closed time of our librariy.

　　In my opinion, our closed time of the librariy is a little too early. Because in the day time, most of the students are having classes, they cannot come to the library. And in the weekend, the closed time even earlier, which has leaded lots of students can’t go to the library frequently. Under such circumstances we hope to extend the opening hours. Only by this way can we have more chances to go to the library.

　　Thank you for your time and your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　、、、、、

篇二：英語(yǔ) 建議信 寫作指導(dǎo)及模板

　　應(yīng)用文

　　建議信 (Letter of suggestion)

　　一、簡(jiǎn)介

　　(1) 建議信寫作注意事項(xiàng)

　　寫作目的是提出建議或忠告。不是投訴信，觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)

　　先。

　　(2) 寫作方法

　　① 首段：

　　a. 簡(jiǎn)介自己，不要羅嗦；

　　b. 說明目的，注意語(yǔ)氣。

　　② 主體：

　　a. 提出具體建議；

　　b. 首先肯定優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再寫改進(jìn)內(nèi)容，否則變成投訴信；

　　c. 經(jīng)常進(jìn)行交流，注意對(duì)方感受，時(shí)時(shí)提到你和我，否則容易跑題寫成議論文，因?yàn)閮?nèi)容與議論文相似。

　　③ 尾段：總結(jié)建議，注意禮貌，易于接受。

　　(3) 寫作流程圖

　　二、結(jié)構(gòu)

　　第一部分：說明寫信的目的

　　套語(yǔ)：

　　(1) 來信收到，得知你下個(gè)月要對(duì)中國(guó)進(jìn)行一次為期十天的訪問，我建議…… I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that……

　　(2) 寫此信是要提出我對(duì)飯店管理進(jìn)一步提高和改進(jìn)的建議——建立我們自己

　　的網(wǎng)站來吸引更多的客戶。

　　I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our

　　hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.

　　第二部分：介紹詳情、提出建議

　　套語(yǔ)：

　　我建議……

　　I’d like to suggest that ……

　　May I suggest that……

　　In my opinion ……

　　I would like to make a recommendation that …

　　I am writing to advise you of ……

　　If I were you, I would ……

　　第三部分：提出希望采納建議，盼望回復(fù)

　　套語(yǔ)：

　　(1) 請(qǐng)仔細(xì)考慮我的建議，謝謝。

　　Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.

　　三、示例

　　Writing (30 minutes)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.

　　1、表示歡迎。 2、提出對(duì)度假安排的建議。 3、祝愿

　　建議信模板

　　Dear ,

　　① I am very ______ to know that . ① 寫信的原因 ② I'm looking forward to . ② 表示歡迎

　　③ I'm afraid that ③ 表述建議理由 ④ I'd like to suggest that first……then _ . ④ 提出建議

　　⑤ I believe this kind of arrangement will________________ ⑤ 有說服力

　　⑥ Moreover，if _____________ , ⑥ 補(bǔ)充建議

　　⑦ It is necessary for you to . ⑦ 提出建議 ⑧ With_______________you will . ⑧ 建議理由

　　⑨ Wish_____________________________ ⑨祝愿

　　A Letter to a Schoolmate

　　June 23rd, 2001

　　Dear Xiao Wang, that you are soon

　　coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday. 第一段表示歡迎

　　If you can stay in Beijing only for a week, 表明建議的原因 that you will have a

　　tight schedule 語(yǔ)氣親切，符合說話人身份關(guān)系

　　historic interest.

　　敘述詞和副詞 places that you such as 一目了然 the Palace Museum, the Summer Place（頤和園）, the Great

　　Wall; you can visit those places you think less then使文章結(jié)構(gòu) important.

　　will make you have enough time to appreciate（欣賞） 使自己的安排具有說服力 what you really want to see. really want to be a good

　　traveler, read some 建議有理有據(jù) books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. more knowledge

　　about these places, have a better

　　understanding of Chinese history and culture.

　　I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing.

　　in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing. 表達(dá)良好的祝愿，符合文體要求

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours ever,