范文一：

　　I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship。

　　then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

　　At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

　　譯文：

　　我要太陽在我的假期。我將去那里一艘宇宙飛船。我需要一個大藍色的飛船。

　　然后我會駕駛宇宙飛船到太陽。太陽很熱。所以我穿上super-shirt。在早上,我將為我的早餐有太陽漢堡。

　　八點鐘,我將會和我的朋友玩。超級狗狗和超級女生。超級狗狗是白色和黑色。超級女聲很聰明。超級女生和超級狗狗喜歡和我玩。所以我跟他們玩了四十分鐘。然后我做我的家庭作業在我的房間小紅小藍表。在家里工作,我將吃午飯。我要吃太陽沙拉。我將做一些紅色給太陽寶寶的玩具熊。我要喝紅色的果汁,紅色魚和紅米飯。所有的東西都是紅色的。然后我需要大量的水在太陽,因為太陽太熱。所以我將走到宇宙飛船。我將駕駛宇宙飛船地球。

　　范文二：

　　My holiday was good. I stayed at home for sometime. I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games. But one day, my monther, my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games. And I bought a new uniform in the evening. I'd like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. I says, " Thanks a lot. " I bought some shoes. I want a pair of sports shoes. In the shop, the wonderful song added tour pleasure. I see the black shoes. my monther says, " There are beautiful !"

　　I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fun.

　　譯文：

　　我的假期很好。我呆在家里一段時間。我去天一廣場,買了同樣的游戲。但是有一天,我的母親,我的弟弟和我去天一數碼廣場買游戲。在晚上,我買了一件新制服。我想要一杯蘋果汁我母親給我買了它。我說,“非常感謝。“我買了一些鞋子。我想要一雙運動鞋。在商店里,美妙的歌聲添加旅游快樂。我看到了黑色的鞋。我媽說,“漂亮!”

　　那天我很開心,因為我去天一廣場,有很多的樂趣。