我最喜歡冬天 I like winter best.
【習作要求】
Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.
內容要點
1.四個季節(jié)中任選一個季節(jié)。
2.被選季節(jié)的特點(氣候、時間、事物、活動等)。
3.人們在此季節(jié)所從事的活動。
4.作者自己喜愛的活動和感受。
【參考范文】
I like winter best. Though it is very cold, it is good for skating. I often go skating on Sundays with my father. When it snows, everything turns white. Trees and houses are covered with thick snow. How beautiful the world looks! My friends and I like to make snowmen. Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other. That's a very interesting game. I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.
我最喜歡冬天。雖然很冷,但很適合滑冰。我經常在星期天和我父親一起去滑冰。下雪的時候,一切都變白了。樹木和房屋都覆蓋著厚厚的積雪。世界看起來多么美麗!我喜歡和我的朋友一起堆雪人。有時我們做雪球扔向對方。這是一個非常有趣的游戲。我非常喜歡寒假,因為春節(jié)是一年中最快樂的時光。
【名師點評】
這是一篇描寫季節(jié)的文章,文章難度一般。要求從自己的角度描寫季節(jié)和感受季節(jié)。應注意以下幾個問題:
(1)確定全文的時態(tài)。此文一般選用一般現在時。
(2)除了對季節(jié)的描述,一定要有自己的見解,這是得分的重要內容和關鍵所在。
作者用流暢的語言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表達清楚,結構緊密。
The Winter Holiday 寒假
I like the winter holiday very much.
Though it's very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.
I can watch cartoon every day.
I needn't go to school frepuently.
Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.
With the festival coming,I can play all the time.
I can play video game with my brother.
I am good at playing PC game.
So I often beats my brother.
Then more and more relative came to my home.
We had dinner together.
It's so lively that I'am very happy.
But I still have to do my homework.
我非常喜歡寒假。
雖然它很短,但我可以享受春節(jié)。
我可以天天看動畫片。
我不需要去學校。
有時我可以和朋友到外面去玩。
隨著節(jié)日的到來,我可以一直玩。
我可以和哥哥一起玩游戲。
我擅長打電腦游戲。
所以我一直贏。
然后越來越多的親戚來我家。
我們一起吃晚餐。
這是如此生動,我很高興。
但我仍然要做我的家庭作業(yè)。
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