一、前言

　　和單邊結(jié)構(gòu)一樣，雙邊結(jié)構(gòu)也是雅思作文中的常見題型之一，在分析題型的基礎(chǔ)上，如何使用雅思寫作模板，淡化雅思寫作模板痕跡，是大家需要思考的問題。本文就雙邊結(jié)構(gòu)和大家探討如何淡化雅思寫作模板痕跡。

　　二、分析

　　真題鏈接：In some countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

　　以上是劍橋中的考試真題，相信大家都已經(jīng)非常熟悉了。我們就一起結(jié)合此題，對雙邊結(jié)構(gòu)的整體文章結(jié)構(gòu)和遣詞造句做一個簡單的對比。

　　1. 引言段

　　引言段是通篇作文的開篇之作，對于它的寫法多種多樣。但是無論怎樣書寫，切忌出現(xiàn)以下模式性的語句樣式：

　　模板語言：

　　Nowadays, the discussion about ……is a very controversial one. Those who criticize……. argue that……, but people who advocate……, on the other hand, maintain that……

　　這樣的模板相信大家不會陌生，它曾經(jīng)受到無數(shù)考生的青睞。但是我們說過，這樣過于機械的語言，很難體現(xiàn)出考生對考題文字的理解，更為糟糕的是，你的開頭有可能和無數(shù)人是重復(fù)的！

　　下面我們就做一個簡單的對比：

　　非模板語言：

　　No matter in which country, children are, without any exception, regarded as the protected in society, not to mention making them involved in any forms of paid-work（調(diào)用背景知識，引出話題）.The necessity of allowing them to make money with their own hands is indeed worth discussing（結(jié)合對考題文字的統(tǒng)一轉(zhuǎn)換，自然流露雙邊討論傾向）