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　　During May day,I went to Shanghai with my family.We all fell in love with it at the moment we saw it.

　　Shanghai is really a beautiful city!There are many tall buildings and trees!There are also many flowers,it makes Shanghai look like a nice garden!If I have oppotunities to visit Shanghai again,I will be very happy! i go to beijing yestoday.i see great wall and so on .

　　i'm very happy because i see a old red man. he is 95 years old.i like him because he tel our many story.

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　　五一期間,我和我的家人去了上海。我們都愛上了它目前我們看到它。

　　上海真是一個美麗的城市!有很多高樓和樹木!上海也有很多鮮花,看起來像一個漂亮的花園!如果我有機會再次訪問上海,我將會非常快樂!我昨天去北京了。我看到長城等等。

　　我很高興,因為我看到一個紅色的老人。他已經95歲了。我喜歡他因為他電話我們的許多故事。