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　　My favourite animal is tortoise. Tortoise walk not fast. But I like the tortoise. Why? Because, tortoise is a cute animal. It have a short tail and a four short foot. It have a little head and a hard shell. They are forty-five little and cute tortoise in My home.

　　They like to play in the water. When they afraid some thing. They wall run fast. They like to eat the fish. I often buy some small fish to them to eat. They can catch the fish fast. First, they fake(假) sleep.

　　When the fish swim near they mouth. They catch the fish fast and bit the fish head. So, the fish die. They can eat the fish. In winter. They like to sleep in the sand. When they sleep, they don’t eat any food . Because they wall hibernation. But, when they are thirsty. They come out of the sand. So, we must give water to them to drink.

　　I love the tortoise. I hate the eagle. Because, the eagle often eat the tortoise with it sharp mouth.My favourite animal is tortoise.

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　　我最喜歡的動物是烏龜。烏龜走路快。但我喜歡烏龜。為什么?因為烏龜是一種可愛的動物。它有短尾巴和四個短腳。它有一個小腦袋和一個堅硬外殼。他們是45小和可愛的烏龜在我的家。

　　他們喜歡在水里玩。當他們害怕一些事情。他們墻跑得快。他們喜歡吃魚。我經常買一些小魚給他們吃。他們可以很快的抓到魚。首先,他們假睡眠。

　　當魚游在他們的嘴。他們很快的抓到魚,魚的頭。所以,魚類死亡。他們可以吃魚。在冬天。他們喜歡睡在沙灘上。他們睡覺的時候,不要吃任何食物。因為他們冬眠。但是,當他們渴了。他們出來的沙子。所以,我們必須把水給他們喝。

　　我喜歡烏龜。我討厭鷹。因為,鷹經常吃烏龜用它鋒利的嘴。我最喜歡的動物是烏龜。