題目：On Dormitory Security

　　寫作要求

　　Dormitories on campus were reported to be broken into and burglaries happened regularly.

　　What should both students and universities do to reduce this kind of crime?

　　Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

　　On Dormitory Security

　　You are to write in three parts.

　　In the rst part, state speci cally what your opinion is.

　　In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.

　　In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

　　Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriatenes. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

　　審題思路

　　本題是一道問題解決/建議型的題目，一般建議型題目的寫法是復述題干內容 ，直截了當提出自己的建議, 然后擺事實講道理說明該建議有什么好處 ，最后把文章引入一個自然的總結段中即可。但是根據這個題目的題干，重點不是用理由來支持某個建議，而是詳述該建議是什么，即分小點說明學校和學生應該分別做些什么。

　　范文賞析

　　On Dormitory Security

　　It is reported that recently in quite a few universities, dormitories on campus have been broken into and burglaries have happened every now and then. In fact, students have complained a lot that burglaries are like nightmares in their college years. I think it’s high time that both students and universities did something to reduce and eliminate this kind of crime.

　　引言部分：作者先說明有報道說最近寢室遭竊的現象很多，困擾著學生們，然后提出學生和學校都應采取措施。

　　On the one hand, there are some measures which universities can take. First, universities should have all the dormitory doors and windows checked, find out and repair the broken ones so that thieves cannot go in easily. Second, the number of university security staff should be increased. Security personnel should patrol on campus and cross-question any suspicious person.