About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1

　　pregnancies, according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking University. ____2

　　The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3 within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4

　　families to moderate size.

　　This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal deaths in developing countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5 the United Nation’s Children’s Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high risk categories. ____6

　　The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7

　　maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8

　　pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9

　　mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than two years apart.____10

　　答案詳解：

　　1. 將 had used 改為 used。

　　因?yàn)榇司涫翘摂M語氣,表示與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反,故條件從句中應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)。例如:

　　Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 許多人原本會(huì)成為聰明人-如果他們不自以為聰明的話。

　　2. 將 publishing 改為 published

　　report和publish時(shí)邏輯動(dòng)賓關(guān)系,故應(yīng)使用publish的過去分詞短語來修飾report。例如:

　　Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的發(fā)現(xiàn),不管多么微不足道,都將成為知識(shí)寶庫中的一部分。

　　3. 將 theirs 改為 their 4. 將 among 改為 between

　　在兩次懷孕期間留出足夠的間隔時(shí)間,故用between。

　　5. 將過去分詞 excluded 改為介詞 excluding

　　excluding意為“不包括……”

　　6. 將 respectably 改為 respectively

　　respectively 意為 “分別地 ”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意為“可敬的，值得尊敬地 ”。

　　7. 將 evidences 改為 evidence

　　evidence是不可數(shù)名詞。

　　8. 將ill改為illness

　　9. 將 year 改為 years

　　10. 將 lesser 改為 less